Thanks to all for listening!
Jay, thanks for taking the time to give me advice as useful and complete. I needed remember things that people always say about mixing but in practice really I don't pay attention on it...
I think more variation is needed but my ideas are finishing to this track, :P....maybe I will put in and out some elements and I will work more with the separation in this mix.

I will upload again the revised version of the track when I can get a different and more complete sound.
Thanks again!