allo mate
really quite good this. Mix is tight and clean, well structured and flows nicely. I like the big weird build up that goes nowhere - very effective.
Not got too much to offer on the mix, sounds good but I'm only on headphones.
Main things lacking for me - the track lacks groove a bit. Seems a bit static, and a lot of the sounds are a bit dry. Would like to hear a bit more pattern variation, and better us of reverb to fill the space out. Minimal stylings are great, but the best thing about being sparse is the amount of space you get to play around with. A track like this is crying out for reverbs, creative compression, fx playing about with the stereo space.... (IMO of course)
Just feels a bit flat at the moment, like it has monster potential but all the FX and verbs have been turned off. I'd keep the track as it is and put masses of movement into verbs, compression and fx.
Good work mate, very nicely done. Be keen to hear this more finished.