Vinvanman - Evolving Floors

[vinvanman]

Thanks BloodStar :) check the new link for full track.

http://213.129.73.14/users_audio/154...E974309405.mp3

[UngratefulNinja]

Interesting tune, I like the sounds of the chords and some of the higher pitched noises. The bell like sound that bounces around the stereo field is pretty cool.

Couple of things I noticed tho, I kinda don't feel the groove or movement of the tune, the arrangement feels a bit static at times. The delay and reverb on one item is a bit extreme, makes the mid-range a bit washy and some of the elements get lost in the tune. Also, I notice a delay on what kinda sounds like a 303ish bassline. Fair play to doing that but I wouldn't in my opinion, don't want so much low end energy getting delayed or verbed constantly, kinda muddies of the bottom of the tune. Maybe try splitting the 303 bass into a couple of layers and only put a delay or verb on the high and mid layers, leaving the bass alone to keep it defined.

The bass and kick feel rather light tho, what kick sample are you using? The kick has a nice thud/thwack but completely lacks much bottom end definition, the bass gets a bit lost there in the bottom as well. I know its there but I can't hear it very well. You need more layers! :P

There are some very good ideas in here in my opinion, alot of great potential, just need to clean up some of the sounds and get everything sitting in the right place in the mix.