just listening to last version. content wise i pretty much ilike it as i see some potential in there. you have got nice "naples-like" kind of lead sounds,. i like it,. see the track would be ace when you add some beefe bassline. some kind of fat resse bassline could work well, tho.

production needs work, imo. kicks dont fit there i think. what i would try is, mute the kick and bass, work the main body the best you can, then add some kick+bassline+closed hat as the main groove,. balance the levels, add some compression and reverbs.
looking forward to next version.