Really enjoying the feel you got here...

That spacey lead sound sound which moves around and the sound you bring in at 1:49 complement each other well... good placing of your elements and thoughtful structure with rides and claps coming in quite deftly...

The perc you bring in at 1:14 is a tad dry and seems a bit loud too so put some verb on the send and then nudge the volume down a tad... your other bits of percussion are a bit dry as mentioned - - so lend some attention to these - it don't need much just to get them to sit a little bit further back in the mix...

Am on headphones but the bass seems a bit static, so some light Lfo treatment needed, and needs some sub to thicken it up a bit - - there is also some muddiness coming from here and the kick - take out about 4db with eq at around 350 - 400hz with high Q ratio (thin scoop) over the whole mix... are you side chaining a compressor to the kick on your bass at all??

Ok... try that n then look at each of your sounds and see how 'big' they are and whether they can be made bigger with either less eq shaving on the bottom end, and/or a bit of light chorus/short delay etc.. have a play around with each sound using various effects you have and see what you come up with - tis good for future reference to play around with each sound just to see how it can be manipulated to make it more interesting....

This too has promise so look forward to the next edit... hope that helps