First Techno tracks online

[SubNet]

Hi everyone !

Here are my first 2 techno trax online .

http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.asp...853&T=9414

and

http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.asp...847&T=2899

Any feedback would be greatly appreciated , but remember these are my first 2 trax (previously I made drum and bass and industrial) so dont expect the tune of the year or anything (im working on it ) .

thanks!

[MARKEG]

1st thing I noticed (which meant i couldn't really listen to them right), is they're well too fast for the style you're obviously trying to make... leave that to the DJ's to do...

usual tempo for your type of techno is 138-140bpm.

if you want to make it faster, then create a new style :=]

[MARKEG]

track 2 is the best..... an ok track actually but well too fast...