reason can be spectacular ;)

not sounding too bad mate, structure wise its as asomplished as some released hardstyle ive heard. im not sure about that acidish line though

the roll that stops at 3:32 & 5:29 needs a crash/similar sound at the end or reverb to tail it off, just stops a bit too suddenly.

i think if you give it a couple more layers going on, spread the hats etc out a little and get down to some eqing then it'll be good :)