nice dark tune, ben.
creepy atmo with funky groove,. i like those little soudns here and there. would love to hear it on big rig in some strange abandonned place, haha. deadly.
production sounds good i must say. trying to find some sounds i dont like, but everything fits there nicely. maybe you could add more percs to give it more drive, or some clanking loops here and there would be sweet, aswel.
also, not too keen on that ride which is playing from the beginning, but thats the only thing, hehe.

good work!