Should this not be in the production section?

Hmmm tune does the same thing pretty much all the way through.
Needs more variation, depth and something to hold the interest past the 2 minute mark, cos I already knew what was gonna happen for the rest.
Also very shallow low end, and overall lack of warmth. Mix seems a bit too cramped into a narrow band of frequencies, could be opened up with more sparkle and separation in the top end, much more depth in the lows.
Mix seems crushed as well.