Slow your tempo's down.
Start the track at 125 if it has rhythm and sounds right then speed it up.
It will also give you a better understanding of what sounds are going on at the time.
Do each sound separetly and spend hours listening to one rhythm to clean it up if you have to.
If you like schranz then distort your sounds on purpose but make sure its clean enough to be separated from the rest of your track.
Then buy some sample cds of all sounds and kicks etc and see the difference between funky fruity samples that come with thte kit and imported ones.

Good Luck and I will check your stuff out in 2 months to see progress.