I really wasn't expecting constructive advice but thanks anyway Mark.

I've promised myself that I will complete this and further into a full track to see how I fair making a style as you say 'I don't understand' maybe it will give me a better perspective on the music as one that people really do have a passion for.

At the moment it's just a 1.50 odd second sample that I constructed at college and thought would be funny to post to you guys.

My little mission...hehehe ;)