Original Tune - bit of a banger - Feedback?

[jansen]

Hey Peeps,

new to blackout, thanks for having me!

Here is a tune ive been working on, its not mastered.. I would really appreciate some feedback on it, as im now at a point where I have heard it way too many times! ;)

Jansen - 88 Miles Per Hour (ver4).mp3

its a rough export, but im looking to make this better, more impact etc..

[tintintek]

hi
i like your track man, im gonna try it with my serato this afternoon in order to make me an better idea... (sorry for my english)