hip-hop startled by dance music

[The Overfiend]

I said Hip Hop, not that crap that's out now that is a bastardized form of "rapping"

[markandrew]

still love this

[The Overfiend]

[The Overfiend]

Thanks for your "contribution" to this discussion...

[DannyBlack]

I'm listening to Black Sunday at the moment. Takes me back- savage album.

[Adamina]

It is a good start as far as the scene goes but you need to think about changing some of your description. The first sentence needs to be changed e.g. "our very expensive stereo we bought etc." I'm afraid that doesn't sound right. Also "The smell of spilt alcohol on the living room carpet stunk out the place." In life you would probably think like that but when writing it doesn't always work.

[SlavikSvensk]

Champion gear that I rock, you get your boots knocked
Then attack you like a pit that lock shit DOWN
As I come and freaks the sound, hardcore
but giving you more and more, like ding!
Nah shorty, get you open like six packs
Killer Bees attack, flippin what, murder one, phat tracks
A'ight? I kick it like a Night Flite!
Word life, I get that ass while I'm fulla spite!
Check the method from Bedrock, cause I rock ya head to bed
Just like rockin what? Twin glocks!
Shake the ground while my beats just break you down
Raw sound, we going to war right now

[The Overfiend]

Rest In Power

[DannyBlack]

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[teknorich]

Spammer - check the links in his sig.

Can one of the mods report this and get his account closed?

*edit - boy are you guys fast!*

[DannyBlack]

Yeah, it was a Bot. Clever little things. I banned it.