http://64.68.1.184/fast/HiD/drumbuster+boddhidharma.mp3
This is a sketch.
Criticism needed.
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11-02-2004, 03:34 PM #1The Demon Beast
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You is a Baad.......Shut Yo Mouf!
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11-02-2004, 07:06 PM #2BOA Lifetime Member
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keep the bass in from the start i think, sounds too empty at the start. Apart from that I like it, especialy when it drops into the pattern at 1.48
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11-02-2004, 08:07 PM #3acieeeeeeeeeeeeed
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i agree with fernando that it sounds too empty at the start, maybe have a bass line at the start or some extra percussion, i would also maybe add a shaker or a slightly different hi-hat pattern earlier on, i love the hats that come in towards the end though, really gets it rocking, nice work
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11-02-2004, 10:32 PM #4The Demon Beast
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Thanks fellas,
Results will be posted in a few days.
More suggestions welcome.Wetworks
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12-02-2004, 02:18 AM #5Junior Freak
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I agree also about the bass line, i like the drums you used, maybe a bit more percussion. other then that i like it!
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15-02-2004, 10:57 PM #6BOA Lifetime Member
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Er - no. Keep the bass out at the beginning to make it easier to mix
Originally Posted by Fernando
keep the bass in from the start i think, sounds too empty at the start. Apart from that I like it, especialy when it drops into the pattern at 1.48 .
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15-02-2004, 11:28 PM #7Supreme Freak
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i like this track, and agree with jonnyspeed about the intro, i like the way it starts off as it is.
Not sure about the flanged?sound you've got going all the way through, I think it needs something else on it, maybe chop it's sustain level and distort it a bit
, or bend the pitch on it.
Like the sketch tho.
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