Grampers - Broken Bass

[teknorich]

I prefer this one:

Grampers - Grampers - Free Base 18 - SoundCloud

The drum loop is good, especially around the 2 min mark where it is more developed, and then the 3 min mark where it beefs up again.. I think it needs a good growly, deep bassline to give it more driving force, and maybe cut up the vocal or do something more with it, cos at the moment it is a bit too muffled to hear properly, but also not really exciting enough. Either make it louder/clearer and bring it to the front of the track so that the words speak for it, or play with the sample, add reverb/FX/whatever to make it sound more edgy.

But yeah, the percussion is nice and tough, definitely got real backbone there, so develop on that mate.

[Grampers]

I prefer this one:

Grampers - Grampers - Free Base 18 - SoundCloud

The drum loop is good, especially around the 2 min mark where it is more developed, and then the 3 min mark where it beefs up again.. I think it needs a good growly, deep bassline to give it more driving force, and maybe cut up the vocal or do something more with it, cos at the moment it is a bit too muffled to hear properly, but also not really exciting enough. Either make it louder/clearer and bring it to the front of the track so that the words speak for it, or play with the sample, add reverb/FX/whatever to make it sound more edgy.

But yeah, the percussion is nice and tough, definitely got real backbone there, so develop on that mate.

Sound for the feedback :)

Im still in the learing proccess for getting the sound levals to sound better!
My latest two tracks are hugh improvments, everything sounds alot clearer!

Im going to go back over my first productions and beef them up more!
now that I have a rough idea how the leavles should sound!
also note that I don't have moniters yet and that's really holding me back!

Ill also do what you said im going to add in a sub rolling bass and see how it sounds in the track!

Thanks again for the feedback :)