Brian,

These tracks are quite good mate! I really think you're close here. You've certainly got your own style and I like that alot. Personally, I'd fill these tracks up a bit more with a few more filtered loops - but that's my style and it would make the tracks harder and I'm not sure these tracks need that.

They sound very US style actually. I don't know where you're from but I can hear a big US influence in there. One of the thing I'm not too keen on about this style is it's a bit too much on one 'level' for me to play. More drumloops would definitely give more 'movement'.

Like I say, you're close man. I really don't think I can give you advice, apart from keep at it. Please keep posting your stuff up here!