i quite like this mate.

theres a bit of level clipping at the beggining from that filter, not sure if thats just appeared from the mp3 conversion or its present in the main track but id go back and get rid ofit if your after a good quality pre master.

it sounds as if all your main percussion is going on near the center and its not very defined, id bring that out wider, perhaps pan instruments a bit more heavily left and right and boost there key freqs a little more.

The synth leads in this are quite weak aswell id say youve got fair bit of mid and lower mid to fill out so id bring out the mid in the synths to give them a bit more pressence and perhaps beef up the patches with a little unison or another layer.

it sounds to me like youve got your track how you want it all you need to do now is fill out the sound, fill out the gaps in the frequencies and the space in the stereo image.

depending on what your using for reference, pc speakers,hi fi speakers, monitors will seriously effect your final outcome though, what is your current set up mate?