Yeah well the Jump type thing is out of time, but comes back in "in-time" as it were, if you were mixing, after 4 bars of the weird broken up bit, it goes straight back in to the 16 bar format.  It`s just a bit of ponceu editing to make people falll over on the dancefloof, and to make the record sound like it is stuck ;) 
There is no room in the mix for a bassline.  Do you have tinny speakers?? I would have thought there was too much bass (being a habit of mine, but hey, I`m used to the 24inch bassbins on our rig)
Err it definitely finishes on the right beat, not that it matters.
	
		
			
			
				Ok, I'm going to risk sounding like a cunt here.... I think it's a bit loopy for my liking, I prefer a little more variation
			
		
 
	 
 Don`t worry, you don`t have to like it matey.  If everybody liked what I did, I would be on Top of the Pops and MTV, and you would all be calling me a sell-out.
Cheers for the comments though, anyone have any more advice?
Oh Jim, I don`t understand why your download keeps cutting out, must be a problem your end, ooerr!!