Nice one everyone for your feedback, i wouldnt go as far as "ear shattering" Richi v, but i can see that there is alot more i have to learn. Those tracks up on acid were the first mixdowns that i had done. Since then i have added more synths and compressed alot of my tune.
Doesnt look like this tune has much pottential by the sounds of it, might start from scratch, Keeping some of the the pointers IQ and corbzy tuched on. Nice one, Keep you informed on how my next ones goin.