Not a bad track mate, but could do with a few touches.

Its hard to tell with this bit rate, but it does sound a bit flat. I think some more of the mid and hi freq could do with boosting. There is also a lack of percusion in this track??? Try sticking some more in, and panning them in different ways to give it more depth. Also when the track kicks in from the first break, it doesnt seam to do much The kick in from the first break is the most important part of the track, and should be the part with the most in. It seams you just take a couple of things out of the break and stick a kick with them. Try adding some more layers.

Apart from that, not that bad really. I cant touch on the overall prodcution as i cant tell from the quality of the file.

Keep up the good work ;)