The levels check out fine with my system. And I played it on a rig last night at a party and it sounded fine. Obviously the compression relaxes a little during the breakdown, but this is intentional as you get a little top end rush when you play it on a big rig, and then a huge nasty crush after the break.

But I might add some more dark ambient sweeps and textures to the background, just to add a little more of a random element.

Cheers for the feedback.