hiya,

Ive just had a listen, as far as your production goes in this it all sounds spot on, There's enough stuff in there to make it sound pretty full. What I didnt like though was the part going from the main breakdown into where it kicks back in again.
You brought a nice riff in but didnt do enough with it, then you take it out again an when it comes back in an the tune starts up again I was like "so what"
(just listened to that bit again) I think the problem is, as its coming towards the end of the breakdown it should be building up but that sort of breaksdown even more, try and at least keep some part of the synth in there right upto the end of the break, maybe use a filter to lower the frequency of it as comes towards the end an bosh it back up again when it all kicks back in so it sounds more powerful. That would sound alot better to me.

Apart from that though, it was ok. I enjoyed the delay on arnie's voice too.