[HARD TRANCE/HARDSTYLE] Check out some of my tunes

[RichieV]

Hey guys
I would appreciate any feedback you can afford! Especially the pros!

http://members.shaw.ca/djrichie_v/Mu...DanceFloor.mp3


and


http://members.shaw.ca/richie_v/HEAVEN_Master.mp3

thanks in advance!!

[Hakka.]

Hey guys
I would appreciate any feedback you can afford! Especially the pros!

http://members.shaw.ca/djrichie_v/Mu...DanceFloor.mp3


and


http://members.shaw.ca/richie_v/HEAVEN_Master.mp3

thanks in advance!!

Hi man. First thing, good stuff with both tracks. Murder On The Dance Floor was not bad, droned on a bit... but still very good for what it is.

HEAVEN_Master, has some odd bits which don't sound right (like the pitch dips...) however I love the build up in it. Good track.

[Hakka.]

Hey guys
I would appreciate any feedback you can afford! Especially the pros!

http://members.shaw.ca/djrichie_v/Mu...DanceFloor.mp3


and


http://members.shaw.ca/richie_v/HEAVEN_Master.mp3

thanks in advance!!

Hi man. First thing, good stuff with both tracks. Murder On The Dance Floor was not bad, droned on a bit... but still very good for what it is.

HEAVEN_Master, has some odd bits which don't sound right (like the pitch dips...) however I love the build up in it. Good track.

**** ME I LOVE THE RIFF ON HEAVEN_Master! GREAT SYNTH USE AND THE MELODY IS SO WELL DONE!

A bit faster and I'd caine this if I had it on vinyl!

[Hakka.]

Hey guys
I would appreciate any feedback you can afford! Especially the pros!

http://members.shaw.ca/djrichie_v/Mu...DanceFloor.mp3


and


http://members.shaw.ca/richie_v/HEAVEN_Master.mp3

thanks in advance!!

Hi man. First thing, good stuff with both tracks. Murder On The Dance Floor was not bad, droned on a bit... but still very good for what it is.

HEAVEN_Master, has some odd bits which don't sound right (like the pitch dips...) however I love the build up in it. Good track.

**** ME I LOVE THE RIFF ON HEAVEN_Master! GREAT SYNTH USE AND THE MELODY IS SO WELL DONE!

A bit faster and I'd caine this if I had it on vinyl!

and played out a bit more of course...

[Hakka.]

fantastic track. The more I listen to it the more impressed with the latter track. The scot project styl build ups is brilliant.

Great use of hardcore beat, snare drum, rolling kick drums and hi hat. Really powerful. The cymbols are well placed too.

Basically I love the persussive work... surely this must get signed!

:clap:

[Hakka.]

man I'm so impressed with that second tune. This is Scot Project level. Really class production.

MAN I NEED THAT TUNE ON VINYL!!!!!!

[Hakka.]

THIS IS EXACTLY HOW I WANT TO PRODUCE!!! hard... but with such DEEP MELODY!!!!

:cry: eo emotional... great stuff!

[Hakka.]

I hate the idea that there is something out there I could not do... I will one day be at this level... dont care how long it takes me!

[Hakka.]

send that tune to wicked tunes germany! THEYD LOVE THAT AND DEFO SIGN IT!

[EmotionComplex]

Murder on the dancefloor wasnt my cup of tea but thats just personal taste but im really into heaven master! youve got a wikkid german kind of sound going and the riff is very catchy and uplifting, i dont think the percussion gets going enough in it though, maybe a ride cybal would work to fill it out and some more thicker hat layers but other than that i can fault it, cool stuff :clap: :clap:

[Hakka.]

Murder on the dancefloor wasnt my cup of tea but thats just personal taste but im really into heaven master! youve got a wikkid german kind of sound going and the riff is very catchy and uplifting, i dont think the percussion gets going enough in it though, maybe a ride cybal would work to fill it out and some more thicker hat layers but other than that i can fault it, cool stuff :clap: :clap:

cool glad others have had a say on this too. I've gone really mad over this tune, but I really rate it.

[DJ Corbzy]

Bloody ell Hakka, couldnt you have said that in one post? :lol:

[namkeaps]

awwwwwww leave the poor lad alone he is excited about the track :D:d downloading now will let you know what i think in 5

[DJ Corbzy]

It's a good track mate I have to agree, wouldn't play it but would be happy if I made it... ;)

[RichieV]

holy , thanks for the feedback!

i actually get depressed because i can't get things to sound the way i want them!

thats why i was hoping for some feedback by the pros!
I don't know what it is , eq , reverb or compression but i just cna't get things to sound right

[DJCraig Ryan]

man I'm so impressed with that second tune. This is Scot Project level. Really class production.

MAN I NEED THAT TUNE ON VINYL!!!!!!

Fair play Hakka, its feedback like this which is needed so much.
What a compliment to be paid- SCOT PROJECT, your doin' something right mate!!

Wanna listen to this so much, but PC is playing up!!

gotta keep trying as i love scot projects production.

well in Richie

[DJCraig Ryan]

Forgot to ask, what Hardware/Sortware are you using for ur tunes??

[EmotionComplex]

right i gave this a proper listen (last time was through my headphones)

the structure of the second track is good and i personally like the ideas but heres stuff that needs sorting.

Kick drum = Needs to be a lot more defined, compress the bitch.

EQ = The hats/claps etc that are allready there needto be brought out,get them sparkling through the mix, the 96kbps mp3 might be effetcing them also, but im going from what i can hear at the moment.
They also sound very centered, try spreading the instruments out.

The main riff could do with a serious dose of eq ing also, open up the mid range a little and take away some of the bottom end and perhaps widen the stereo image of it to fill it out.

The bass line is also very weak in the mix, bringup its level.

Basically youve got 90% of a good track here, the problems just lie in the eqing and layers of it. Get the percussion busyer and the other elements in there own space and youl be sorted.

[Hakka.]

right i gave this a proper listen (last time was through my headphones)

the structure of the second track is good and i personally like the ideas but heres stuff that needs sorting.

Kick drum = Needs to be a lot more defined, compress the bitch.

EQ = The hats/claps etc that are allready there needto be brought out,get them sparkling through the mix, the 96kbps mp3 might be effetcing them also, but im going from what i can hear at the moment.

The main riff could do with a serious dose of eq ing also, open up the mid range a little and take away some of the bottom end and perhaps widen the stereo image of it to fill it out.

The bass line is also very weak in the mix, bringup its level.

Basically youve got 90% of a good track here, the problems just lie in the eq and layers of it. Get the percussion busyer and the other elemes in there own space and youl be sorted.

good feedback. I heard most of what you are saying when I first listen to it... but after more and more of hearing I thought it was great idea's in there and sound.

[EmotionComplex]

right i gave this a proper listen (last time was through my headphones)

the structure of the second track is good and i personally like the ideas but heres stuff that needs sorting.

Kick drum = Needs to be a lot more defined, compress the bitch.

EQ = The hats/claps etc that are allready there needto be brought out,get them sparkling through the mix, the 96kbps mp3 might be effetcing them also, but im going from what i can hear at the moment.

The main riff could do with a serious dose of eq ing also, open up the mid range a little and take away some of the bottom end and perhaps widen the stereo image of it to fill it out.

The bass line is also very weak in the mix, bringup its level.

Basically youve got 90% of a good track here, the problems just lie in the eq and layers of it. Get the percussion busyer and the other elemes in there own space and youl be sorted.

good feedback. I heard most of what you are saying when I first listen to it... but after more and more of hearing I thought it was great idea's in there and sound.

definetly, its a well sequenced track with some nice touches to it, just needs polishing and quality brought up then i dont see why it wouldnt get signed by someone

reminds me of the older ipnotika releases