sounds ok, the drum loops you keep using is too loud in the mix and sounds out of place when it comes in though.

i think there could be more activity in the lower end of this track, fill out the bass end more, im at the breakdown now the riff and note changes are nice but again i think that loop that keeps appearing is making it sound out of place, bass and lower mids is what this is lacking i think, thicker percussion layers would help to spread it out and i'll wager you could get the kick drum more prominent in the mix.