Not a bad tune mate ;) Not really my thing tho so its hard to comment fairly on the content side. I would say tho, its a bit long isnt it?? Everything seams to gel well together, but a couple of things stand out to me. The hit hats are panned to drastically imo. Maybe just pan them a little more to the center. And the bass seams far to wide I think the kick could do with bringing out, or even changed for a deeper, more rolling kick. Everything thing else seams spot on tho mate ;)

Keep it up dood :lol: