Quote Originally Posted by WezEnTiger
ok , thanks for hosting me everyone ,i m about to get Gregified , i may never return !
hahaha, right *cracks knuckles*

i wasnt expecting the mp3 to be 604kbps :lol: but fair play, no glitch can hide now ;) .

the first min or so youve got spot on, production is sounding how it should be, it sounds like bassline and the main riff are fighting for space though, bassline is almost lost from 2:19, i think the bass line needs compression and the main riff eq ing to open up room, try using waves maxxbass on the bassline after youve toghtened it up a bit, it will allow you to add much needed bottom end to it, maybe get rid of some of the lower mids from the main riff aswell.

im typing as i move back and forth in the recording so apologies if the feedback is a little muddled in order.

i think its a bit muddy at the moment, needs more balance in freqs as most of whats going on is happening in the mid and lower mid range of the recording,if you could place the riff higher i think that would help.

the breakdown is a bit of an anti climax also, the section before it is pretty thick in percussion while after the break it goes into a less busy section which would be more suited to nearer the end.
i think the main thing you need to do is go in there and tighten everything up and give it its own space to exist in. i remember you saying you have wavelab, as your working on the track get it running through the spectrum analyser within wave lab and see were the space is being cramped or under used and go back and eq acordingly.

get some tight compression on the kick drum so it snaps through also, it needs to be a lot tighter.

the keyword is tighness here :lol: , its a bit loose at the moment i think, for a hard trance trance it needs to hit hard and tight.

hope this helps, of course this is all just my opinion ;)