its not bad so far, the epic stabs sound quite good, hardstylish sound to it.

intersting idea to have that guitar break, good to see your trying something a little different mate.

all in all id say it has promise if you do a little more work on it, its definetly minimal but it works for me, perhaps not enough to justify 9 mins length though, get it down to 5 or 6 and expand on it a little and i think youll have a nice little track done mate ;)