real good arrangement and good placement sounds. melody is strong too.
wot i wud suggest to make it better, is maybe a little more imagination on the percussion. a few more original hats, better snare, and some nice sample loops, or percy percussion
this will take it a bit further, as i feel the programming of the percussion, hats etc, make the track sound a little outdated.
but very good, u got the talent, and know ya scales and chords n melodys. :clap: