i realyy like this track, but have to agree it does sound a bit basic on the prodution side.....
i think that with a few more loops and some big ol bass you will be right in there!!
i love the track at about 3 minutes - after that im not so keen on the tinkly synth that comes in(if i was making it i would just leave it with the deeper stabs and use the bass beats to pump it after the break - but i see why that synth is there and if that is your style, that is fine!) but really thats just a personal preference...
if the track had those things in i would definitly sign it for our new label - 'midisync' which weve just started through neuton....
maybe you should come down to london and hook up with me before i leave and i can show you some little tricks to get the groove/ production a bit phatter...
definitly good work i say though!!