I like it, but the guys are right, way too harsh.
Sounds like you stuck quite a hard compression over the whole song and this has cuased serious hiss (and reduced the overall dynamic). I could be wrong.
The tops end up lacking depth, and come out flat and hissy, so this needs addressing.
That bongo loop that comes in at 2:14 needs to be blended in to the mix a little, maybe some more reverb or a delay.
Nice kickdrum workout though. That would really flap the trousers!!!

Just get down and clean up the EQ and you will have an absolute belter.

I have liked most of your stuff so far :clap: