oh yeah man this is starting to get much better - mix is getting much better - youve pumped up yer bottom end a lot which is good - perhaps the percussion is still a little too seperated from the rest - or thinking about it maybe it sounds like that cos u aint got much in the mid.. try sticking a big open ride in there every now and again - perhaps quite quietly as a sort of 'glue' for that top end.

i though for about half way in the track was gonna don a big pair of pink hotpants, stick a dummy in its mouth and go all trancey.. but it didnt... well, a little maybe but ive allways thought pink is your colour ;)

good effort!