Nice stuff - I particularly like th epart in the hard mix when the sharp open hat loop comes in around 1:40, really drives things forward - why don't you try incorporating the tribal loop into the hard mix, as a drum break that the track could drop into after it has had a period of intensity i.e. let it roll over into the tribal break which could filter down or something before bringing everything back in over it? mmm, tribal and hard!

Or you could tell me to shut up and to stop interfering, either's fine with me ;) .........