hhaha u bugger Ed , u been snooping in my Movie Wavs folder ?
hehe i was gunna use samples from Event Horizon soon , dam , heh

nice hat work
defo beef up the beat , bass is ruff yum

vocal work is clever , nice ,

break down is ace ,

not to sure about how high pitched the beep melody is , hurts my ears , or am i being a tart !

clever melody structure , works well with feel of the tune , bit repetitive though , add 1 mopre layer at the end maybe !

overall good tune , few tweeks here and there nuttin drastic ,

7/10 ;)