My latest trance track = Please comment!

[Dave Elyzium]

Heres a link to my latest trance track...Its a low quality MP3 for download speed, please have a listen and let me know what you think so i can make changes to it..........

Thanks alot :) :) :)

http://www.elyzium.org.uk/dave_elyzium_neon8.mp3

[darkstar]

Just listened to ur track, its quite good well i think so anyway. What about doing more of a build up before the first synth part comes in ? i like the start when its just the bass line and the kick with that sound.

Around the 3.54 mark im sure i can hear a mobile phone sound, like a nokia ring sound, or maybe its just me ?

[djjaym]

downloaded it i will listen later and let you know what i think

[Dave Elyzium]

thanks for the feedback Darkstar..im workign on a new version and will post it up here as soon as its done...
anyone else??

[djjaym]

its good ,theres something i cant put my finger on about it though(ill let you know when i do)