Ahaaaa... hmmmmm
WHo is this La Roux n what was his input here>>?? n what's up with him Danny? (gossip monger alert :briggin:)
Productions all quite neat and clean here - as per really as you have good quality production skills to hand - like the first light stab that comes in - vocal is lovely - this would sound great on a big club system -but what I will say, and this aint to yank yer chain here as I am going by other ditties of yours I've heard - :mrmyagi:
- is that the bass comes across as very unimaginative and is static as hell .. this affects the rest of the elements and makes for a very rigid feel throughout - no wobble apart from the vocal that I like... just seems to me that the attention has been paid to this element only... I'm wondering if you have eq'd or put too strict a filter on the bottom of some of your sounds .. which makes for a clean mix but don't help each individual sound much
I'd re-design your bass element and use a kick to match whatever you come up with... or keep the vocal and make a whole new tune - without any distractions! (of the La Roux variety - nah juss yankin' now mate :briggin:)
See yer at the End o' Summer Ball innit... should be good