Of the three you have going at the moment on here, I think this is mucho the best one..

I would be very pleased walking into a party and this was pumping away... would get the juices flowing no bother :)

Just for me I would leave the bass where it is as this gives the tune alot of power and creates the basis for it's identity... (that's not production advice by the way - there are others more qualified, as you know)

So... pleeeease put a whopping mutha of an Acid line in at about 3mins and another one to complement it and you will have an absolute barn-stormer!!!:rockin:

Your name is Acid Trash after all...:briggin: