Tribally/Funky?

[Siege]

Not bad mate.......i quite like that melody, try knocking the keys uve used, off than on, get more of a groovey feel to that hook.
A little extra key in there too wouldnt go a miss......give it a little change now and again and will help the trk progress more.......same with the pads, little key change now and again.

Production does need work...mainly the pointers Vlastas already mentioned.

[tonyc2002]

Not bad mate.......i quite like that melody, try knocking the keys uve used, off than on, get more of a groovey feel to that hook.
A little extra key in there too wouldnt go a miss......give it a little change now and again and will help the trk progress more.......same with the pads, little key change now and again.

Production does need work...mainly the pointers Vlastas already mentioned.

Thanks dude, could you just clarify what you mean by "knocking the keys uve used, off than on, get more of a groovey feel to that hook". Do you mean taking some notes out?

[Siege]

Thanks dude, could you just clarify what you mean by "knocking the keys uve used, off than on, get more of a groovey feel to that hook". Do you mean taking some notes out?

The notes are all playing on with the beat, try knocking some off beat, play about with positioning...get more groove.

If you also add another note in there,try using an off note key.....can give it a more techno discordant sound.

[tonyc2002]

The notes are all playing on with the beat, try knocking some off beat, play about with positioning...get more groove.

If you also add another note in there,try using an off note key.....can give it a more techno discordant sound.

Cool, thanks :coolio: