Grampers - Broken Bass

[Grampers]

Hey lads!

My name is Grampers and I recetly got into music production!

Im making techno for now but I hope to be making tech trance soon enough aswell!
Anyway these are two of my latest tracks and feedback would be grealty appractied :)

Grampers - Grampers - Broken Bass - SoundCloud

this would be a more funky one!
Grampers - Funky Freak - SoundCloud

Some of my other work is here Grampers - Tracks - SoundCloud
feel free to check them out :icon14:

[C.O.Prodigy]

I like techno but this is good.

[Grampers]

I like techno but this is good.

Nice one :icon14:

[DannyBlack]

Well Grampers boi! Story bud.

[Grampers]

Well Grampers boi! Story bud.

Alrite vandall :)

I was looking for an intro section but couldn't find one!
Seems on here people get good feedback on productions!

You still making tracks?

[teknorich]

I prefer this one:

Grampers - Grampers - Free Base 18 - SoundCloud

The drum loop is good, especially around the 2 min mark where it is more developed, and then the 3 min mark where it beefs up again.. I think it needs a good growly, deep bassline to give it more driving force, and maybe cut up the vocal or do something more with it, cos at the moment it is a bit too muffled to hear properly, but also not really exciting enough. Either make it louder/clearer and bring it to the front of the track so that the words speak for it, or play with the sample, add reverb/FX/whatever to make it sound more edgy.

But yeah, the percussion is nice and tough, definitely got real backbone there, so develop on that mate.

[Grampers]

I prefer this one:

Grampers - Grampers - Free Base 18 - SoundCloud

The drum loop is good, especially around the 2 min mark where it is more developed, and then the 3 min mark where it beefs up again.. I think it needs a good growly, deep bassline to give it more driving force, and maybe cut up the vocal or do something more with it, cos at the moment it is a bit too muffled to hear properly, but also not really exciting enough. Either make it louder/clearer and bring it to the front of the track so that the words speak for it, or play with the sample, add reverb/FX/whatever to make it sound more edgy.

But yeah, the percussion is nice and tough, definitely got real backbone there, so develop on that mate.

Sound for the feedback :)

Im still in the learing proccess for getting the sound levals to sound better!
My latest two tracks are hugh improvments, everything sounds alot clearer!

Im going to go back over my first productions and beef them up more!
now that I have a rough idea how the leavles should sound!
also note that I don't have moniters yet and that's really holding me back!

Ill also do what you said im going to add in a sub rolling bass and see how it sounds in the track!

Thanks again for the feedback :)

[DannyBlack]

Alrite vandall :)

I was looking for an intro section but couldn't find one!
Seems on here people get good feedback on productions!

You still making tracks?

sure am mate. I got the next 4 days off to put the finishing touches on two. They both need mastering so I'm doing that over the next couple of days. and I have to Master Wooden Hippo.

Good to see you getting well stuck in mate!!

[Grampers]

sure am mate. I got the next 4 days off to put the finishing touches on two. They both need mastering so I'm doing that over the next couple of days. and I have to Master Wooden Hippo.

Good to see you getting well stuck in mate!!

Good stuff man!

Im waiting to gat a track back form mastering! When I get it ill send it around on here!
yeah man nothing better sitting on abelton hours on end pulling your hair out haha

Once you get a few beats going bang your hooked :)

[DannyBlack]

big time man. I'm loving really loopy 2000 ish techno at the moment so thats what Im making primarily. I love coming home from work and making loops, I get lost for hours.

[Grampers]

big time man. I'm loving really loopy 2000 ish techno at the moment so thats what Im making primarily. I love coming home from work and making loops, I get lost for hours.

I spent two days on ableton without realising haha

It's so addictive! Its only now I can see an improvment so that's pushing me even more!

[DannyBlack]

yeah thats it aint it- when you listen back and it clicks- savage feeling. second only to Pussy.

[Grampers]

yeah thats it aint it- when you listen back and it clicks- savage feeling. second only to Pussy.

haha tha's one way of putting it!

[Bionic_Eye]

i only get oops sorry cant find the page

[Grampers]

i only get oops sorry cant find the page

Yeah sorry lol. I changed my name on soundcloud and I forgot to put the new link's in.

http://soundcloud.com/graham_walsh/grampers-broken-bass

Graham-Walsh - Funky Freak - SoundCloud

Here's my soundcloud page theirs more tracks on it :)
http://soundcloud.com/graham_walsh

[Bionic_Eye]

dark shadows is a banger

[Grampers]

dark shadows is a banger

That's off getting masterd when I get it back Ill send you a copy :)